A Class of Excellence - 6E

Friday, September 21, 2007

Compo Activity Follow-up: Final Revised Copies

Dear class,

The task for today:

1) Download the file which the other pair/trio has edited.
2) Read what another pair/trio has edited for you, as well as their comments.
3) Revise/Edit your work. This will be the final copy which I will be assessing.
4) Click here to upload the final revised copy of your pair/trio's work.
The folder is Pair Revised Copies.
Remember to save the file name as Grp Members' names(Final revised copy).

Time limit: maximum of 10-15 minutes

I am eagerly anticipating the best copy - most improved and expressive story, as well as grammatically correct work.

Have fun!

Cheers,
Miss Elise Yu

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6 Comments:

  • comment on nathaniel & wei xiong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    too many mistakes...yeow loong & teng fone did a good job pointing out all the mistakes! :) :0 ;} :] -_-"

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 9:15 AM  

  • Nathaniel and wei xiong
    Like the last part whne the person nearly died! hahahahahah muhahahaha
    >.<^^-_-"T_T

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 9:18 AM  

  • This activity realy helps me a lot in composition. I really learnt a lot.

    weijie & chester

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 9:19 AM  

  • sry i look at darren and yan xiang

    Nathaniel and wei xiong

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 9:21 AM  

  • we had fun doing this activity and we believe that it will help us improve on our composition writing as well.

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 9:23 AM  

  • this sux... plain simple...i have come to realise that it sux...


    wei xiong

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 10:39 PM  

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